STARBURST!!! Come take a dive with me as I tickle your
taste buds in telling you about my favorite candy. This description will give you the perfect
view of what this candy is and the attributes which makes it the perfect candy
around. This piece falls under the
descriptive writing genre. As you
listen, pay close attention to the adjectives used and use your five senses to
see the perfect picture. ENJOY!!!
Written by: Abigail Bascombe
Performed by: Abigail Bascombe
MY FAVORITE CANDY
Excellent work Abigail. I love the way that you described the starbust. This can surely be used to introduce descriptive writing. The students will definitely enjoy the piece and will try to impress you by describing their favourite food/snack. My taste buds are asking for more and I have not tasted it in a while.
ReplyDeleteShaquille Aldonza
Great job!! This had me longing for a starbust. A Great description and excellent use of images. Anyone who views this podcast would be eager to have a starburst.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this one. Thanks for the wealth of knowledge that I have gained on this candy. The imagery added substance to this text and really had me drawn in.
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Abigail I am now going to get some Starburst candies! You appealed to a few senses and this made your piece effective. Very age appropriate especially how you ended with the expression "Starburst is my best candy in the whole world". Students like using this expression. High equality graphics and illustrations. Great intonation as well.
ReplyDeleteRyan Bicar.
Wow! you did a great job at describing the starburst. This piece literally had my mouth watering and yearning to eat starburst. It was age appropriate and there were great use of images to complement your piece.
ReplyDeleteAbigail! I now crave a packet of Starburst! Wonderful job! I love the audio and visuals used in this piece. Superbly done!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. This video has sent me on a sugar rush. I felt like I was in a candy wonderland. If I wasn't already a fan of Starburst, then she has certainly convinced me.
DeleteWow! I now really crave for starburst. This was an excellent way to introduce the students to your favorite candy. I felt like i could actually taste it based on your description. The visuals were also well done. this added life to the piece.
ReplyDeleteBrittney Duplessis
ohyes! you do love candies. I enjoy this video, It made my taste buds ask for candy which I am not fond of. This indicates that your video has persuaded me to have a candy.
ReplyDeleteWell Done Abigail! This podcast not only kept me interested but it made me want to eat starburst. I can see that you associated all your descriptions of starburst to your five senses. This was well articulated with appropriate images.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Abigail!
Wow girl I think you should sell your piece as an advertisement for starbust candy. I loved your timing Abby especially when you said the burst of flavors(i saw the melon burst open) that was amazing and also the variety of fruits used to make them. YOur timing on the video was impeccable. This podcast was really nice. Keep it up Abby. Wonderfully done!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteR.Narcisse
Ron you stole my comments. This is my exact sentiment as it relates to Abigail's podcast. Great job honey!
DeleteAlthough I don't eat sweet snacks, your description of the starburst has persuaded me to try some. The graphics used to describe this candy is wonderful. The use of the sensory detail provided me with mental images to the point that I can also taste this starburst.
ReplyDeleteSoria Cornibert
Thanks fellow bloggers!!
ReplyDeleteAbigail
Viewing and listening to this digital story telling convinced me to pick up a packet of Starburst the next time I visit the supermarket. Great job Abby. Proud of you!
ReplyDeleteYou have done a good job at sharing one of your pieces of writing with your fellow bloggers.
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